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« on: November 19, 2008, 03:52:43 pm »

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« Reply #1 on: November 23, 2008, 02:42:33 am »

Yeah, so I haven't been active for what? A month? Was moving across provinces which is a bitch. Done now, but I'll still be less active than I used to be.

Anyway, the illustrating looks better, but I found it annoying to have to figure out which panel to read before another.

Anyone else have any thoughts on this?
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« Reply #2 on: November 24, 2008, 04:16:29 am »

I actually have no idea what's going on anyway so the order I read the panels in doesn't entirely matter.
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« Reply #3 on: November 24, 2008, 09:10:49 am »

I actually have no idea what's going on anyway so the order I read the panels in doesn't entirely matter.

Well it does, but on the other hand...
I had a hard time reading because the letters were so small :P You need to improve your commedy a bit thought, the rest of it was good.
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« Reply #4 on: November 24, 2008, 12:11:46 pm »

The first panel is set lower due to the twisted sanity lettering. next one is to the right, slightly higher, third is below the first, fourth is below the second, fifth is oddly in the middle, sixth is bottom left, and last is bottom right. Hope this helps guys!
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« Reply #5 on: November 24, 2008, 09:49:18 pm »

Oh.. Alright. By the way is he holding that can in an odd way in the last panel?
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« Reply #6 on: November 26, 2008, 09:50:46 am »

he grabbed it normally, then flipped it upside down to show there is none left.
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« Reply #7 on: November 29, 2008, 11:58:36 pm »

It'd be awesome if I could read it!

Although I see you guys have chosen the more traditional route. Have you tried coloring pencils to fill in the white spaces? It might work better, at least, for backgrounds.
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« Reply #8 on: November 30, 2008, 01:40:17 am »

To be honest, I'm suprised that this site is still up.

The comic itself was "meh" and isn't very funny.. It seems like you just put in the magic missile joke for some rehashed laughs. I can barely read the comic due to the text.. and that's really it.

How many people still come to this?
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« Reply #9 on: November 30, 2008, 02:12:30 pm »

How many people still come to this?

one less
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« Reply #10 on: November 30, 2008, 06:09:37 pm »

Although I see you guys have chosen the more traditional route. Have you tried coloring pencils to fill in the white spaces? It might work better, at least, for backgrounds.

It isn't meant to be completely filled. This separates it from the real world. MR Satan is watching the movie and this is his interpretation of it.
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« Reply #11 on: December 11, 2008, 10:19:19 am »

What the hell is wrong with Riyant? Why is everyone growing up? :(
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« Reply #12 on: December 12, 2008, 02:15:49 am »

What the hell is wrong with Riyant? Why is everyone growing up? :(

What did he do?
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« Reply #13 on: December 22, 2008, 11:25:27 pm »

My biggest peeve is that the text still has not be sized correct to where it can be read efficiently. Sorry, but that seems a bit lazy to me. The text shouldn't be all squished so I can't read it, or have to try hard to.

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« Reply #14 on: December 24, 2008, 03:02:25 pm »

This is Poohbear

I'm gonna work on the text size, positioning and finding a nice font but not right at the moment its christmas eve.
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